Theming & Consistency Checking Night

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Tonight's been another of those nights when I haven't gotten a whole lot of fiction written; instead I've been going over The Price of Entanglement for consistency and theme and making notes on things I need to address with the characters going forward. This seemed like such a simple story when I started writing it. It's funny how they can take on a life of their own after a while, isn't it?