Another Experiment

I'm having some serious trouble getting things rolling again with The Price of Entanglement, and I think the reason is that I'm just not that thrilled with the current chapter. The whole bit at the clinic with Dr. Toure and Philip and all that, it's material that needs to make it into the story, but the way I've written it just rings a wrong note for me.

I'm thinking I may try alternating works, see how that impacts my view of the story. I banged my head against this one today, and got nowhere. Tomorrow I'm going to try heading back into The Diffident Hero and see how that one treats me; right now it's feeling like a more inviting journey. I was having a lot of fun writing that.

I also have some ideas for short stories I'm going to have to get out of my system soon too.